Young Pilot (Taller)

Named Aldemar but known by the nickname "Taller" — earned within hours of arriving at Trimont for training due to his lanky build. He is one of six current Cloud Skim pilot trainees and comes from Setting/Veridell/Veridell, Trimont's sister island.

Taller shows exceptional promise as a pilot, with precision that speaks of hours of practice beyond his assignments. He is talented, but sometimes too eager to prove himself — a combination that mirrors a younger version of Elian.

Background

  • From Veridell, which shares an orbital path with Trimont
  • Has family still living on Veridell, which directly motivates his actions during the story
  • Earned the nickname "Taller" on arrival — lanky build, immediately memorable

Characteristics

  • Deeply concerned about his home island and the people on it
  • Shows initiative and courage, sometimes to the point of recklessness
  • Respectful of authority, but willing to act independently when he believes it's necessary
  • The precision and extra hours of practice suggest he knows he has something to prove — to Trimont, to himself, possibly to his family on Veridell

Role in the Story

Taller is the catalyst for Elian's journey back to active piloting. His concern for Veridell drives the main conflict, and his recklessness forces Elian to confront his fear of flying in dangerous conditions rather than letting another pilot be lost on his watch.

By the end of the story, he demonstrates real growth — successfully piloting under extreme conditions. His arc runs parallel to Elian's: where Elian's story is about overcoming paralysis, Taller's is about learning when confidence becomes overconfidence.

Needs Content

What goes here: More specific story beats involving Taller. What exactly does he do that triggers the crisis? What is the nature of his relationship with Elian — is it antagonistic initially, or is Elian simply distant?

What's needed

  • Physical description beyond "lanky"
  • Why he chose to train on Trimont rather than Veridell (if Veridell has its own pilots)
  • Specific story beat: what does he do, and when, that sets the plot in motion
  • Whether he and Mira interact in any meaningful way